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Monday, 18 June 2018

Wednesday, 13 June 2018

Matariki dayn reconut

On friday we made a galex in a jar and we made a model out of strikes and and then we went to the hall and then we showed owl staff on the stage

Monday, 11 June 2018

The bucket


Start Writing Here: Once a poner time on a sunny day there was some bees they were floating in the water they were drinking. And then the birds came and was drinking out of the bucket. And then a rat came on the Edge of the bucket and was drinking. and then the rooster came and put their heads in the water and then the lamer came and put its head in the water it was so Thirsty that almost drink all of it. And then the bull came and drake all of it.

Monday, 28 May 2018

choose it Narrative

Choose It Narrative


Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.
   
When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.


Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end.  It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.


Image Attributions:
  1. Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons
  2. Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
  3. Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.



Begin Writing Here:


and they all crash and And the Phoenix come going through keeps doing a circle and makes a tornado and a plane it's going through the tornadoes and it keeps going in and I heart balloon goes down all the way up until I can reach Mars and the water jet stays in the water In the water there was a tornado and a volcano under the world's biggest volcano in the world the jet stays in the dig water and a big tornado and lover to and it will Explosion and the water come up    




Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:
I have:
1
Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.
2
I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.
3
I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.
4
I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.

Once you are finished…
  1. Make sure your blog post includes:
    1. JPEG of your planning
    2. A copy of the picture you choose to write about (correctly attributed) AND a picture which you have drawn to go with your writing.
    3. Your story from above
  2. Add these labels to your writing. Can you think of any others you could add?
        2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3
  1. Copy the URL to your blog post and paste it to the blog log.