move ya body

On monday it was the first day of school and I was so excited to meet our teachers and our class then it was time to line up for assembly I was so happy i couldn't wait so we walked to the hall and saw our priceapole after that we saw this picture that said move ya body and then we started to watch team four movie and it was about fitness and it was so cool we some kind of laugh because it was funny and then when the movie was finished mr j and mr burt were on the stage Mr burt came out on the stage with a crazy outfit and the music was from beyonce and when he was dancing he forced all of us to stand up and dance with him so we standed ups and did some fitness with mr burt it was kind of tiring but fun at the same time.

narrative

My bio poem

My bio poem

Tori

I am funny and i love sports

I enjoy sports and play outside

I can draw, do flips and write stories

I feel happy when i am at the pool

I wonder what my cat is doing

I fear standing in front of heaps of people

I care about animals like cats and dogs

I dream of having a pool

tori

term 3 animation

Hi my name is letoria and this is my animation and i am moving and running around.and moving around and i finished the run  Move ya body, this week we a learning about movement.Legs moving and running. I am running around and working out.

point of veiw

I had asked Valeli and Jerry to pose for my photo. They thought it would be a good idea to pretend to play basketball with a shoe. I thought it was a silly idea, but they really wanted to do it, so I agreed.




Valeli and Jerry took turns trying to get the goal with the shoe. This photo is one of the only times that Jerry got the goal. I was finally relieved that they had finally finished so I could finish my writing work.







“Oh man, Jerry isn't giving me a turn. I think I can shoot the shoe into the basket better than him”.




I wonder if I will ever get a turn or whether Jerry will just keep trying. I guess if he doesn’t get it in we can stay out here and just muck around and not do any work.  

points of view

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her pace as she realized that i was within touching distance of her lamb. She let out a loud low bleat that echoed across the paddock. The sleeping lamb lifted it’s head and turned towards us before slowly returning to it’s sleep. As the sheep got closer and closer I thought about whether I should turn and run, I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.”

peephole narrative

Peephole Narrative

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas

Using the “keyhole” picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing.

Start writing here:

Once upon a time there was a girl name called Letioria.

Latisha help me with my writing and full stops.

Narrative

once upon a time there was a girl name Tori and she went for a nice walk to a park people were talk to her and said are you ok? She didn’t talk to them

Animation Voice Over

Hi my name Tori and this is my animation. This is my animation about force of flight and i am flying in the sky lift means that the plane is going up and thrust means that the plane to fly the plane and weight makes the plane go down drag makes the plane to help weight to go down.





The end

immersion assembly

Today we went to the assembly in the hall and then owl theme for this term we a doing we like to move it and  team 4 is learning about Bridge it is so cool what we a learning because we do cool stuff like we build Bridge.

skydiving

On the weekend i went to my aunt's house and i asked him if he Wanted to go skydiving and then me and my aunt's went to the airplane because it was his birthday


And then we went up in the plane and i jumped out and then my aunt's jumped out i landed first it was so fun that i want to do it again my.



The end

How to fly a plane

WRITING A NARRATIVE

WRITING A NARRATIVE








WALT: include descriptive and creative vocabulary in our writing


WALT: use a variety of sentence types in our writing.





Taking a look at the picture above, what do you see? Was it like this at the beginning of your story? Did it appear in your story? Was it still like this at the end?





Things to think about:


Use a variety of sentence types


Use speech


Use descriptive language


Use punctuation (full stops/ capital letters)


Check spelling





INTRODUCTION:





Setting


(Where does it take place?)




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Characters


(Who is in the story?/ What are they like? Personality, appearance).


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PROBLEM: (Pick 3 of the 4 below)





When/Where/ What/ Who











RESOLUTION:





How is the problem fixed?


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Start Writing here:





Once when I went to the dusty river it was full of rubbish and it was ugly and it had some long grass and it has a walkway and there are heaps of tall trees they are fat too much stickies and big rocks that we can sit on. Leaves to.

Sentence Types

I am learning how to write Sentence's