fiafia 2018

Recount

WALT: recount a moment in time.

WALT: structure our writing into paragraphs.

Your task

Write about the moment you waited at the side of the stage ready to perform for Fia Fia and then your performance on the stage. What did you do? How did you feel? What did you see while you waited at the side of the stage? What did you see while you were on the stage?

PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the keywords to your plan.  Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.

Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?

Who? Pt england school   What? Fia fia Where? field When? The last day of school

BODY: Describe what happened.

Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)

What happened while you waited at the side of the stage, ready to go on?I felt  Nervous How did you feel while you waited at the side of the stage? Great What did you see and hear while you were on the stage?cheering and it was amazing.

Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)

What happened while you were on the stage? I saw pelpel wazeing   What did you see and hear while you were on the stage? Cheering and it was cool

Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)

What happened once you had left the stage? Great What did you see and hear after you left the stage? Shouting and cheering.

Conclusion (Summary)

How did you feel after performing at Fia Fia? Good . Would you want to do it again? Yes it is so cool .

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:I went to the field sat down and I was shivering cold.We had to wait in the rain for a couple of minutes before we went on stage.when we got on stage it was so cool the feeling.I felt so proud and happy the everyone was clapping and smiling.It was so fun.