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Friday, 31 August 2018
point of veiw
I had asked Valeli and Jerry to pose for my photo. They thought it would be a good idea to pretend to play basketball with a shoe. I thought it was a silly idea, but they really wanted to do it, so I agreed.
Valeli and Jerry took turns trying to get the goal with the shoe. This photo is one of the only times that Jerry got the goal. I was finally relieved that they had finally finished so I could finish my writing work.
“Oh man, Jerry isn't giving me a turn. I think I can shoot the shoe into the basket better than him”.
I wonder if I will ever get a turn or whether Jerry will just keep trying. I guess if he doesn’t get it in we can stay out here and just muck around and not do any work.
Thursday, 30 August 2018
my point of veiw
Photo:
Point of view of person taking the photo:
I had asked Valeli and Jerry to pose for my photo. They thought it would be a good idea to pretend to play basketball with a shoe. I thought it was a silly idea, but they really wanted to do it, so I agreed.
Valeli and Jerry took turns trying to get the goal with the shoe. This photo is one of the only times that Jerry got the goal. I was finally relieved that they had finally finished so I could finish my writing work.
Point of view of a person in the photo:
“Oh man, Jerry is useless. He should give me a turn. I think I can shoot the shoe into the basket better than him”.
I wonder if I will ever get a turn or whether Jerry will just keep trying. I guess if he doesn’t get it in we can stay out here and just muck around and not do any work.
Wednesday, 29 August 2018
the sheep's point of veiw
The Sheep’s point of view
“Who is this lady trying to steal my lamb?” I know that my lamb is under the tree sleeping and this lady looks like she is too close. I start to walk quickly along the path towards the lady. I let out a loud, low, bleat to let her know I am coming to save my lamb. The lady is not moving,she is just watching me. I am close to her but she still isn’t moving. I decide to forget about her and run towards my lamb.
Monday, 27 August 2018
points of view
The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her pace as she realized that i was within touching distance of her lamb. She let out a loud low bleat that echoed across the paddock. The sleeping lamb lifted it’s head and turned towards us before slowly returning to it’s sleep. As the sheep got closer and closer I thought about whether I should turn and run, I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.”
Thursday, 23 August 2018
peephole narrative
Peephole Narrative
WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas
Using the “keyhole” picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing.
Start writing here:
Once upon a time there was a girl name called Letioria.
Latisha help me with my writing and full stops.
Wednesday, 22 August 2018
going the distance
From
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To
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Distance (cm)
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Distance (km)
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Annie’s Town
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Poto
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10cm
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8km
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Poto
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Ohiti
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29cm
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10km
|
Ohiti
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Dunchurch
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36cm
|
13km
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Dunchurch
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Eastville
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22cm
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11km
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Eastville
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Totorere
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21cm
|
2km
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Totorere
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Waimutu
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10cm
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3km
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Waimutu
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Manuhou
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30cm
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20km
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Manuhou
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Annie’s Town
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15cm
|
10km
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Total Distance Traveled
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210cm
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79km
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Tuesday, 21 August 2018
Monday, 20 August 2018
Friday, 17 August 2018
Narrative
once upon a time there was a girl name Tori and she went for a nice walk to a park people were talk to her and said are you ok? She didn’t talk to them
Thursday, 16 August 2018
Thursday, 9 August 2018
Monday, 6 August 2018
Thursday, 2 August 2018
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