Friday, 26 May 2017

The Taniwha

This sunny day we went to the river and I saw a creature with sharp teeth, scary dark eyes and he has the biggest mouth. The big creature is scaring the people away and want to eat  the people. I saw blood  on
His teeth.and they were scared  as they ran away it is so dangerous.  the creature claws scratching the rocks and the ground was shaking underneath me. The long grass rustling the creature jaw chomping down. The creature was stuck in this hole.and there is people stuck in hole as they got eaten from the creature. The athe people were saved.the

1 comment:

  1. wow letoria great writing and effort and I hope you get better at writing.